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Week 9 - Draft and Delivery of Script

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LS: dry farming landscapes.
Drought affected areas of Central Queensland will find their issues being brought to the forefront of Parliament by new local State MP, Lachlan Millar.
MP shaking hands and having conversation with farmers.
Mr Millar says his focus will be on giving local farmers and residents the support and attention that this serious issue deserves.
CU: Millar speaking to camera
“For too long this drought has been really hurting the people of Central Queensland and we need to call on all levels of parliament to work together to provide the support needed to implement proper drought assistance.”
LS: Millar walking and talking with workers on a mine site.
Mr Millar will also put forth the importance of state funding to create more jobs in the area.
Shot of Millar speaking.
“Central Queensland is a beautiful place to live but unfortunately due to the downturn in the mining industry, there are just not enough jobs available in the communities. This is something that I am committed to changing.”
CU: Millar shaking hands with Local Mayor
Mr Millar is working closely with Emerald Mayor Kerrie Hayes to ensure the needs of the community are being met.
LS: Millar and the mayor walking through council offices talking.
Mr Millar and Mayor Hayes have been in discussions about the best ways to get money back into the local ecomony.
Millar speaking to camera.
“I will continue to fight to make sure Central Queensland gets the appropriate funding and projects necessary to inject some life back into our local economy.”

1 comment:

  1. Hi Emily - wow. Going really well here. The structure of this is great. Your job now is to do a 'Kate Stowell' on the news read of this. Mark up your words of emphasis, focus on your breathing and volume, and try not to run out of puff at the end of sentences. Lots of potential for this to be professional as the writing rhythm is very good - it 'reads well' for the ear. I hope this helps. :)

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